Task: watch the video ‘Dreamgiver.’ You then have to write a short story or piece of descriptive
writing using this video as your inspiration.
writing using this video as your inspiration.
-We are learning to be descriptive writers (paint pictures with words) so that our readers
can imagine what it is we are writing about and find our writing engaging.
can imagine what it is we are writing about and find our writing engaging.
this is a link to the video https://vimeo.com/106989758
the dream giver by Billie, Ilish
One cloudy night two kids were sleeping in their warm and cosy beds suddenly the dream giver creeped into the old and dusty room through the rotten window. The dream giver had a large white smelly sack that he carried on his back.The large sack carried ten golden eggs that had creamy liquid inside them and when they crack the ousey slime drizzles down onto an item and all the wonderful magic dreams begins. But one of the eggs hit the wrong item and the dream transformed into a deadly nightmare!
The innocent boy woke up in a tropical forest with the sound of fluttering wings made by the colorful butterflies which flew all around but they weren't the only living things in the forest. When the boy looks all around he sees skeletons with helmets and armor on but the one thing that stood out was the big lever on top of a giant rock. And then he accidentally leaned on the lever. All off a sudden, out of nowhere a big crack in the cave appeared and the ground shook.
The boy saw 2 big green colouerd eyes in the dark and heard a big loud screaming noise that echoed through the cave. The big black creature that looked like a Black Panther chased the boy through a forest to a big cliff and then the dream giver dropped a seed in front of the Panther and a tree grew really quickly. The Panther then got trapped in the tree’s roots and then it died in the tree roots. The boy woke up and realised it was a horrible nightmare. The dream giver knew his work was done so he flew away into the black night sky.
The end
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