Thursday 16 August 2018

Beach clean up

We are learning to add descriptive words in our writing. we are learning to write to make the reader fell a certain way.
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  1. Anonymous17 September 2018 at 10:31

    Hi Billy it is James from Karoro School I like your Beach clean up but maybe next time you could add some more writing.

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  2. Unknown26 September 2018 at 14:06

    Hey Billy
    I think it a wonderful idea to do a beach clean up and that is a lot of rubbish you picked up thank you for keeping the environment clean,
    See you at pony club this weekend

    from Rubes

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    1. Anonymous6 December 2018 at 09:56

      Hello Ruby thanks for the comment, It sure was a lot of rubbish we picked up. See you at pony club. From Billie.

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